~ The End ~
28 Mayıs 2012 Pazartesi
A Different Ending
There were, there were a lot of Jack Frosts. Bod did not know what to do. Maybe, the expectations were too high for him, who could have thought that he may die at the end of this complicated war? Jack killed, killed everyone Bod loved. Ms. Lupescu, Silas, Liza Hempstock, his teachers in graveyard and his first family. Actually Jack is not something living-being, he is kind of imaginary. And he fights against Bod. Bod saw the knife which he was holding when he killed his all first family except for him, when he was just a little baby. It was that, somehow Bod knew that it was. He tried to fade but he could not. And also there were many Jack Frosts. All the ones Bod loved was dead know and Scarlett... She was fighting against him with Jack because she fell in love with him. Jack was near to kill Bod? Bod thought that who really Jack was. Was he a human? No, he cannot be, because there were so much blood in his hands, taken from the ones who Jack killed without thinking carefully, as a reflex. And Scarlett, her eyes were big and bright with the desire of love, she could do anything for Jack, the man she loved, Bod knew it and felt sorry for her. And he kept thinking who Jack was. Jack read Bod's mind and answered, "No one can really know who I am, because I am the most famous thing that scares a lot people in that silly, complicated life. But for no more confusion, you actually know me, you can see deep inside people, can't you? So you can understand me and my purpose. But only you, not no one else; ant that is the reason why I am killing you right know. You know me, I am the Devil." Bod could not think for a while, but he accepted the truth as it was. He started to believe because he saw his devil face just a while ago, at the end of his explanation. And he was going to die right that moment, he thought of Lisa and her friendship, he prayed for her to be happy because he really loved her. When Jack's cold knife touched his neck he was still thinking of her, and he understood that he was killed. And then, just a second later Jack and Scarlett disappeared, there was no proof that the devil came down there only a while ago. The wind was blowing and the graveyard was singing its own song as it was normal. And Bod he was an angel on the way to heaven.
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Hi Egesu,
YanıtlaSilI really like the ending of you post because I never thought of killing Bod in the end of the novel, but you thought clever enough to make the readers love your ending. Your creavity has full of emotions. For example you wrote that Bod was just imagery, but is he realyy imagery or not ? This part I realy didn't understand it. However the part with Scarlett was important and suprising too. I was shocked and curious about how you will fix the conflict between Bod, Scarlett and man Jack. The novel has not have a happy ending and this makes your post different than other writers. I think you could explain the part with the imagery part better and I hope you write your post better and you continue to write.